Hanging Bed description By Mackenzie
WALT: use adjectives and to complete a piece of writing QUICKLY
I stood under the dark of the tree. There was a ladder leading up. It was a rectangle shape. The shadow was big. It was swinging left and right. It was dripping water like it was raining. the ground was wet from the water above.
There was a lamp and i climbed up the ladder and I found a bed.
I jumped on the bed and jumped on it all day long
By Mackenzie H
Hi Mackenzie
ReplyDeleteThat is good but you need to put in a photo.
The second to last sentience dose not make sense.
now i have a photo brayden.
DeleteHi Mackenzie its Lillie here there is a spelling mistake in there it has to it's
ReplyDeleteit it like that over all it is really cool.
Oh whoops. I will fix it thanks Lillie
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